Quiz 12-10

I feel that my essay does have some weakness and reveals my strengths. While i was writing the draft i was replaying that day back and forth in my head over and over, so i could get perfect details. Some of my strengths are actually doing my brainstorming and my draft, it helps me with my final paper. Also i use transition words when i write my paper. I have realized my weaknesses. One of my weaknesses would be not sticking to the write tense words.

Quiz 12-3

I think that the deaths of the teenagers are the driver's fault, their own fault. The teenagers knew that the driver was drunk and they knew what the risks were for getting into a car with a drunk driver. The driver should have known not to drive while intoxicated, but sometimes you dont think when you are under the influence.

In class writing: Nov.19,2011

Have you ever went to a midnight premiere of a movie? My first premiere was for the movie Breaking Dawn and it was not so good. We had no set time to leave, I was getting annoyed with people cause they were being crazy, and I wasn't able to be in the same movie theater are my friends.

In-Class Writing: 11-12-11

I believe abortions should not be legal. First of all, abortion is being self-fish, your not thinking about the human growing inside you, your only thinking about yourself. I do understand that some may have not been willing, and thats a different story. But I do  know that many young women do get pregnant so early and don't know what to do, so they immediately go to abortion. Next, religion does have a big part in the decision. The catholic religion does not believe in abortions, or birth control. In other religions they believe that if the women did get pregnant at a young age, the only option is to kill the baby. The girls that do get abortion, sometimes look back and wish they didnt do it, they wish they could just take it all back and never stepped foot into that office. Girls that do get abortion are taking the mistake out on someone who cant even defend themselves. It  was your decision to have sex and your decision only, so you took the risk to get pregnant. Then because of your decision, you ended up getting pregnant and you realize you didn't want this, so you go to the option of abortion, instead of adoption. Finally it could affect the girl. If the girl has an abortion, but gets pregnant later in life what is she suppose to do. Keep the second baby, but then in the back of her mind she knows it wont be right to kill the first one and to keep the second one.  Abortion can tear family apart. The family could want something completely different then what the girl wants. This hard, life changing decision should not be legal, for it does hurt everyone, including the little baby that doesn't get to see this beautiful world.

In Class Writing: Softball Pain!

When I was in the 9th grade I played volleyball and softball. During volleyball season i didn't twist my ankle, sprain a finger, or broke a bone. But when softball came, it was a different story. The first time i hurt myself was at the batting cages. The whole team took a trip to the batting cages to practice some hitting and timing, outside of practice time. When we got there it smelt like sweaty old people.  I was really nervous cause i didn't know how fast it was going to come at me. I told my coach that i was scared and she said that i was going to be okay. As I'm  walking in there i am extremely scared, but thought that i have to do this to conquer my fear. The first ball comes and i swing and actually hit the ball, so as more come I'm getting good swings and soon the scared feelings goes away. Next, the coach told me to press the button and go for another round. I said okay cause i wanted to keep batting. As I'm standing there i am ready for the next one, i watch it as it gets ready to come out. Then the ball comes out and hits my index finger. Instantly I step back and try to figure out what happened while i try to hole back the tears. I felt extreme pain as i tried to bend it. I got out of the batting cage and went to my coach. She said its okay, its just gonna hurt and to put some ice on it. I felt so dumb for crying in front of the other girls but i couldn't help it, it hurt so bad. After the incident i didn't want to go back in there so i sat out and watched other girls.  Finally the other girls were done and we all went home. I walked into my house and told my mom, so she grabbed the ice and put it on my finger. The next day I couldn't practice cause i still couldn't bent it all the way. Playing softball requires a lot of toughness.

Jump Street girl!

If you live in Arizona and you haven't gone to jump street, you need to go. Jump street is a place to go and have fun with your family and friends. When you first walk into Jump Street you will see a big place filled with numerous trampolines and arcade games to play when you dont feel like jumping anymore. The trampolines very in different sizes. There are big, dark blue ones that make you jump higher,and  the fuchsia pink ones that are more for little kids who are scared to jump high. Also there is a little kids area where the kids can play on the huge, blown up, bouncy animals. Unfortunately they dont have any food to buy, but you can buy some of there delicious drinks, which very from powerade  to soda. The smell of jump street smells like a truck full of rubber and little sweaty feet from everybody being there. Once you get to the trampolines you can actually feel the rubber on your feet and hands when you do back-flips, front-flips, and other crazy tricks you can do. Jump street is a popular place to go and have fun with your friends, but you are going to have to get use to the shrieks and yells coming from the little kids mouths, or maybe even your friends when you play dodge ball. I really think everybody should visit Jump Street at least one time in your life to have the experience. Jump street is an awesome place, so i suggest you get in the car and drive over there.

In class writing

My algebra 2 class can be very good some days, or it can be vary bad. Our class is split up into three different groups, the kids who pay attention, the ones that dont care, and the ones that talk back, because they dont like what the teacher does, but they still do their homework. When class starts we all sit down and get ready for the lesson. Well the kids that dont really care just listen to music and go to sleep, but the kids that care about there grade immedietaly take out there homework, and the kids that complain take out there homework and dont ask any questions. At the end of the lesson, the teacher gives us homework and most of the kids dont understand the lesson because of how the teacher teaches, and we basically have to learn on our own. The homework she gives us is about 2 pages long full of problems to work out. The kids that pay attention really dont care how much homework they get, they just do it anyways. When one of the kids for the complain groups start to groan, or make noises majority of the class does the same. Someone always shouts out " Why do you give us so much homework, you know we do have other classes, and sports." or  " I hate this class!" While the kids that dont care join in because they don't want any homework, even though their not going to do it anyways. By the time class is going to end our teacher is mad and the kids just start talking. This is an everyday thing in our class.