Quiz 12-10

I feel that my essay does have some weakness and reveals my strengths. While i was writing the draft i was replaying that day back and forth in my head over and over, so i could get perfect details. Some of my strengths are actually doing my brainstorming and my draft, it helps me with my final paper. Also i use transition words when i write my paper. I have realized my weaknesses. One of my weaknesses would be not sticking to the write tense words.