Quiz 12-10

I feel that my essay does have some weakness and reveals my strengths. While i was writing the draft i was replaying that day back and forth in my head over and over, so i could get perfect details. Some of my strengths are actually doing my brainstorming and my draft, it helps me with my final paper. Also i use transition words when i write my paper. I have realized my weaknesses. One of my weaknesses would be not sticking to the write tense words.

Quiz 12-3

I think that the deaths of the teenagers are the driver's fault, their own fault. The teenagers knew that the driver was drunk and they knew what the risks were for getting into a car with a drunk driver. The driver should have known not to drive while intoxicated, but sometimes you dont think when you are under the influence.